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Seven Days

By: andy holberry

Status: Completed

Summary:

Seven days...

One small week...

Long enough to survive? Too short to live?

You decide.

Is it best to go out swinging and cursing with your last breath, or begging for your life on your knees?

Created: August 23, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013

Genre : Horror

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 3

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1: Seven Days - The Start of it all. 1161
2: Day .1. 980
3: Day .2. 1577
4: Day .3. 1296
5: Day .4. 1232
6: Day .5. 1918
7: Day .6. 2567
8: Day .7. - The End 1715
Total Wordcount: 12446

Reviews (1)


  • D.M. Gergen

    This story is a very intense, quick read. I particularly liked Andy Holberry's use of a journal format to write this. It was detailed and filled with action, while the ending was perfect for the tone the story took. It is definitely worth the time to read.

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    August 29, 2013 Flag


Comments / Critiques


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    This is good writing. The first chapter had enough in it where I wanted to keep reading and see what was going to happen. One editing thing would be to put some of those stand-alone sentences into an actual paragraph. There were many that should be in a paragraph and the few that were powerful enough of a statement to be a stand alone paragraph by itself would then be better emphasized.

    August 29, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


  • Reply

    Thank you for taking the time to read the story and thank you for the writing comments, I am happy for any and all comments and will do my best to include them in future stories. It's always good to know where I can make them better.

    August 30, 2013 | andy holberry


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    Just finished it. Other than my critique above I only found a handful of little grammatical errors/awkward sentences. So very good. I really enjoyed this.

    August 29, 2013 | D.M. Gergen