Silvertongue, a General story | SparkaTale

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Silvertongue

By: Jamie Grove

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Shortly after the tragic loss of her mother, 17 year-old Amelia Pettibone finds solace in the stacks of a decrepit library.  After finding and "borrowing" a mysteriously unfinished novel, Amelia's young brother, Oliver, disappears.  Amelia sets off on a desparate quest to rescue Oliver.

Created: August 20, 2013 | Updated: December 15, 2013

Genre : General

Language : English

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1: Chapter 1 1543
2: Chapter II 1798
Total Wordcount: 3341

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        You have beautiful writing. It flows nicely and the mood of the piece just falls in place. Amelia seems very mature, and I am interested to see what happens later in the story. Only wish there were more for me to read...

        Also, on a bit of a more critical note, I was a little shocked at the end to find the the chapter had ended so abruptly. Maybe you could find a way to wrap up the chapter a little better so that the reader isn't so surprised? I was expecting a little more to happen and felt it was a little awkward. It's a lovely start and I just think the ending should do the rest justice.

        I would love to see where this goes! Keep going!

        November 6, 2013 | Liz uli


      • Reply

        Thank you for your feedback - it motivated me to finally post Chapter II ( except now I need to start working on the next one)!

        I agree I can be really abrupt at times. It's something I need to work on.

        November 6, 2013 | Jamie Grove