Think of the Ducks, a General story | SparkaTale

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Think of the Ducks

By: Jessie Dillon

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Owen always depended on his wife to be by his side. When she goes out shopping one night, his life takes a sudden turn he wasn't expecting. Three years later, he still struggles. His sons wear him out, and he struggles to handle everything thrown on his plate. He finally meets someone new, but more obstacles continue to appear and challenges the strength of his family.

Created: July 18, 2014 | Updated: August 2, 2014

Genre : General

Language : English

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1: Chapter 1 2441
2: Chapter 2 2867
Total Wordcount: 5308

Reviews (1)


  • Danny Power

    A very-interesting start to what is sure to be a very-interesting novel!

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    July 30, 2014 Flag


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    This was a very interesting first chapter, and you did rather well in conveying varying emotions. Both characters were well-detailed and seem entirely believable, and you put a lot of thought into the family. Koby, and his dialog in particular, was great, and he didn't want a repeat of the tragedy that happened. 

    I like the style you've chosen in general, it's hard to explain, but it's different (and just as good) to other novels I've write. It's refreshing to see.

    Consider me a fan!

    July 30, 2014 | Danny Power