Get Out Alive, a Suspense story | SparkaTale

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Get Out Alive

By: Dany Soul

Status: In Progress

Summary:

It's a year and six months into the apocalypse. Winter is here and the stakes are higher as rival groups are becoming more aggressive to fight for supplies and the dead only grow in numbers by the day. For loner drum major and track star Arya Rivers, it's more than she can handle. She has nobody left to love or be with and only carries with her a red mountain axe and her haunted memories of the life she once had. But she has found a way to stop the infection and must get to a place where she can use her knowledge to stop all of this. But she can't do that until she learns to trust and forgive. That all starts with Toby. Taken from a collection of various songs, this is twist on a zombie apocalypse takes a teenage girl from her normal life into the hell we only thought lived in the sick and twisted minds of people... If you wanna get out alive, run for your life...

Created: July 8, 2014 | Updated: October 17, 2014

Genre : Suspense

Language : English

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  • Emi V.

    I enjoyed the chapters you've published so far. I could feel the intensity put into it every time they encountered danger. It drew me in, and I really can't wait to read more. My advice would be to use more punctuation. I find when I read books, I sometimes read out loud, and with yours I ran out of breath from the long and drawn out sentences you had. Example: "We tried the doors to find them locked so we found ourselves turning to lock the gate to the backyard and hide ourselves behind the dumpsters and cluttered remains of an attempt to escape the dead which failed in dried bloody glass and scratch marks on the gate before they were eaten and left to turn." A whole paragraph was made, and only one period could be found! Commas are our friends, they help us break from one point to another. Besides that, I really did enjoy reading this. Keep up the writing, and the intensity put into it. Cheers!

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