Secrets of Aesperia Book 1: Stratalia Conspiracy, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Secrets of Aesperia Book 1: Stratalia Conspiracy

By: Rhuen Stone

Status: Completed

Summary:

It has been one thousand years since the legendary hero Gyro-Lee defeated the divine tyrant queen Rhulan. Where her castle once stood now stands the school of Stratalia; a university for sorcery and adventurers. The grand-daughter of the dean while practicing a rare spell for her upcoming demonstration at the school's annual festival accidently revives a statue of a sorceress in her private garden. Is this strange woman who offers to become the girl's tutor friend or foe? and what of the strange forces that seem to be targeting both of them? *This series varies from a PG to an R rating, intended for mature audiences.

Created: June 24, 2014 | Updated: August 8, 2014

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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  • Just BI-You

    I've taken the liberty of accepting your request for a critque on the forum and I have read the chapters you've written thus far. To put it simply, I like where your going in the story with Rurona and Hollia - master and student - and I can't wait to read more. The only thing that's been bugging me as I read is how you phrase some of your sentences. I can tell you're trying to narrate the story in not just in a third person view but as though you're actually talking to the readers like they were in a movie. That's good, and I liked it, but a little editing would help make a sound a but more cleaner and smoother. Overall I like it and I'm going to favorite it. I hope you write more chapters.

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