Ripples in Our Goodbye, a Romance story | SparkaTale

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Ripples in Our Goodbye

By: Pam Grijaldo

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Kirsten Moore is happy with her life - a steady set of friends, good grades, an amazing family and a partner in crime who will never leave her side. But when a past relationship resurfaces, she'll start to question whether she has really forgotten the pains of goodbye or happiness is too far away for her to achieve.

Created: May 28, 2014 | Updated: June 2, 2014

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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      ""I heard Carter Lewis is coming back." I hear my gossip girl classmate, Millie whisper to her best friend, Lizzie."

      Probably not a good idea to use the same verb in the same paragraph. lol

      Also, the story was great although a more descriptive narration would have been nice.

      I await what happens in chapter two. No pressure. :3

      May 31, 2014 | Kain Delo


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      "No pressure :3"

       

      Don't pressure me, woman! XD

       

      Anyway, thanks for the advice. I suck at writing stories (people have always told me I'm more of a journalism type), but by doing this I think I can develop this talent :D

      June 2, 2014 | Pam Grijaldo