Why Me?, a Romance story | SparkaTale


Why Me?

By: RT 13

Status: Completed


Ty, just another skateboarding high school junior, was minding her own legal business when she gets stuck in the middle of a mafia fight with guns, knives, and potato launchers, only armed with her trusty skateboard. What does she do? Runs for her life only to get captured and asked (read commanded) to marry one of the three sons of the don. And then people want to kill her. Obviously.

Created: August 16, 2013 | Updated: May 12, 2014

Genre : Romance

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 6

Favorites: 2

Reads: 7097

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  • Alyssa Strickland

    Absolutely stunning! Definitely a read for anyone and everyone.

    June 3, 2014 Flag

Comments / Critiques

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    This is so witty, I love it. I've only gotten through the first chapter, but your narrative voice has my grinning like an idiot at my computer screen. Loving it.

    August 22, 2013 | D.M. Gergen

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    Thank you! Glad you liked it and hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters :)

    August 23, 2013 | RT 13

  • Chapter: 28 Reply

    I love, love, love this story! I read it initially because of the mafia part, but I'm in love with all of the characters now! This story is absolutely great! I can't wait to read more!

    April 7, 2014 | Alyssa Strickland

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    D'aww, thanks! I'm so glad you're liking the story. Thank you so much for the comment!

    April 8, 2014 | RT 13

  • Chapter: 33 Reply

    Aww it's over! I loved it, from start to finish! It makes me want to write my own Italian Mafia story, but I'm too afraid I'll plagiarize this one to write it. Ty was the best main character ever, and Dante was the best "Italian stud-muffin" ever! I'm glad you finished it, even if it does make me sad. You should get this published! I know I would totally buy this book! 

    I think you should maybe do a sequel thing for Luca, though. I didn't feel totally fulfilled with his "relationship", since it was a small paragraph describing it. I would be super excited to read it. 

    Other than that, fantastic job! Forever a favorite!

    June 3, 2014 | Alyssa Strickland

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    Haha, glad you enjoyed the story. I had a lot of fun writing it even with the rough patches. You should totally write your own mafia story, I'm sure you'll come up with something creative and unique :)

    I'm flattered you think I should publish but there's just so many things to fix and remove and edit, and that's not even counting the Italian mistakes. WM? will need serious edits before it gets even close to publishing material. It's a dream of mine but I really don't think it will be this book. Thanks for the thought though.

    I briefly thought of doing a sequel for Luca but decided against it. I feel as though I'm done with dictating these guys' lives and it's time for them to go off on their own. I may end up doing a couple bonus/extra chapters when I feel like it, just to see where they are in the future or something.

    Thanks again for the wonderful comments! :)

    June 3, 2014 | RT 13