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The accident

By: Maeve Kilcullen

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Aishling’s life changed in a matter of seconds. Who was this guy who caused the accident? Aishling will have to take her life back into her hands and try and survive the hardest thing ever: life. Will she manage with the help of her friends and boyfriend? But someone wants to see Aishling gone.

Created: January 6, 2014 | Updated: September 13, 2014

Genre : Drama

Language : English

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      The main issue I see is one of tense. You sometimes switch from present tense to past, then back again. I would re-read it paying attention to the tense, keeping that consistent throughout, and correct that first.

      January 7, 2014 | Dave Robertson


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      Thank you for pointing that out. I will change it ASAP. 

      January 11, 2014 | Maeve Kilcullen