Step. Step. Step., a Thriller story | SparkaTale

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Step. Step. Step.

By: Miheal Larson 3rd

Status: Completed

Summary:

Hello. Just a short poem. P.S, I recommend reading in the dark, slowly, underneath the protection of blankets, or with many people around you, and jump at every new word........

Created: January 1, 2014 | Updated: January 1, 2014

Genre : Thriller

Language : English

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Comments: 4

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        It's not very scary, but i like it all the same. I think you could make this into a cute childrens book.

        January 4, 2014 | Heather O'toole /Davies


      • Reply

        Thanks! I might just do that. I've been wanting to team up with a friend of mine for some time...

        January 5, 2014 | Miheal Larson 3rd


      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        Haha, what an ending! Did not expect that... But I can fully sympathize, especially on school-day mornings. Ahem, I found half the poem repetitive, but that's like a double edged sword I guess. It might be overdone, but the onomatopoeia is also endearing in some way. 

        Also, should I be embarrassed to say admit I shivered somewhere while reading this? Hmm, maybe it's the depressing music I'm listening to... Or the winter chill in the air. Or this poem... Probably a combination of all three. Anyways, good job. 

        January 5, 2014 | Liz uli


      • Reply

        Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. O don't normally white poetry, so when I do, it's normally love poems and heartbreak this and that.

        January 5, 2014 | Miheal Larson 3rd