Terry, a Comedy story | SparkaTale

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Terry

By: Turquoize Waters

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Where's Waldo? Where is he going?? I don't think he even knows.

Created: January 1, 2014 | Updated: January 1, 2014

Genre : Comedy

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

Comments: 0

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Reviews (2)


  • David Goff

    I would love tü see this developed. Beyond the fact of unused potential for the Where's Waldo (Book) jokes (although I appreciated the one's present), this story needs... Well , no. Never mind. That's my only complaint. Not enough book jokes. Maybe, no, definitely make it longer. I recommend nothing past a first chapter. That said, make it a 5,000 word or so chapter.

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    July 26, 2015 Flag


  • Liz uli

    Haha, hilarious! The humor is a bit unconventional, and the summary does not shed too much light on the content of the short story, but a VERY entertaining read. It plays off the cliches of hero-character building and concludes in a rather unpredictable way. Not meant to be taken seriously, but good for a few laughs.

    Rating:
    January 4, 2014 Flag


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