My Dream, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale


My Dream

By: Ethan Fitzpatrick

Status: In Progress


A series of tales derived from the minds of those who experienced these events while asleep. The nature of several of these events begs the question as to where our minds go when unconscious? Do we merely experience a chaotic firing of chemicals in our brain that produce our vivid realities, are our minds linked to others and what they see in certain cases, or are we able to freely traverse the realms between dimensions and behold another plane beyond conscious comprehension?

Created: August 13, 2013 | Updated: September 10, 2013

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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      I really like the dystopian sort of theme and how it moves from one thing to another makes it extra surreal :) what's a cell agent??

      August 18, 2013 | Timmie Tots

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      A 'cell agent' is essentially like a regular agent for a security or terrorist organisation, also known as a 'cell'. Also, thank you very much! I appreciate the feedback.

      September 4, 2013 | Ethan Fitzpatrick

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      Firstly, thanks very much for the comment. I really appreciate it. To clear up a few things, every chapter of this story will be derived from dreams I have had. Most of what you read is pinpoint detail of my dreams while some parts are there for creativity purposes. While I may not be pursuing this storyline any longer, it may happen to pop up in another one of my dreams and can be considered a continuation of this 'universe's storyline'. But we'll have to wait and see.

      September 6, 2013 | Ethan Fitzpatrick

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      This story had good writing with only one point where I was slightly confused as to what was going on (when you first destroyed the government and the cell's creature). I was a little surprised by this, though, since from your summary I was expecting something else. Unless this was all just a dream...but either way, if you continue with this storyline I would love to know more details of what was happening, what the power is, what the virus is, what's the motives of this cell, etc.

      September 1, 2013 | D.M. Gergen