I'm Not Alice!, a Romance story | SparkaTale


I'm Not Alice!

By: RT 13

Status: In Progress


Everyone knows the tale of Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll, or at least seen the movie adaptations. Alec, an average seventeen-year-old boy had the books, the movies and the merchandise. A boy who wished Wonderland were a real place. But as the old saying goes, careful what you wish for. Tossed into the world of the Queen of Hearts, the March Hare, the Knave of Hearts, the Hatter, the White Rabbit, the conniving Cheshire Cat and more, Alec is looking for a way back home before he murders the next person to call him Alice. Unfortunately for him, Alice had a few details mixed up when her ‘dream’ was put into words. No one told him that the cast would be vying for either his attention or head, or that he’d be stuck with a charmless charm bracelet on his wrist. [Note: This is a boyxboy, yaoi, gay love, boys love, whatever you want to call it story. If you are homophobic, don't read this and I will delete all and any homophobic comments.]

Created: December 5, 2013 | Updated: June 21, 2014

Genre : Romance

Language : English

Reviews: 3 | Rating:

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  • Danny Power

    One of my favorite introductions to a novel, and I especially enjoyed the twist on 'Alice in Wonderland'. I'm actually very glad you made Alec gay, it's not a big deal ( at least in the opening chapter, which is all I read so far) but I can relate to him just that little bit more. I can also relate to the 'Terminator" characters as well, you made it look entirely believable. You're able to write really well, and I was able to follow every sentence, something that usually lacks in other novels. A very well done, I'm looking forward to reading more.

    August 1, 2014 Flag

  • Alois Denvers

    I like it! It's a really interesting story and I like the twist it puts on Alice in Wonderland.

    December 5, 2013 Flag

  • Lyssandra Blossom

    From the one chapter I have been able to read so far, I can tell already that I like this story. Your style of writing is good, and certainly fluid, and you use a fair amount of descrpition and a wide range of different adjectives, which is always good.
    At the moment I cannot tell you whether or not you use too much description or too much dialogue, as there is only one chapter to base my review on, but from what I am capable of reading so far I can say that you even it out perfectly.
    I would give it a full five stars, but as I have not read enough of the piece to be sure about what to think, for now I shall rank it as four, though in future it may change.
    I certainly look forward to reading more of this.

    December 5, 2013 Flag

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