Status: In Progress
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Created: February 23, 2017 | Updated: December 6, 2017
Genre : Fan Fiction
Language : English
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| Total Wordcount: | 9434 |
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This is a cute little story you've put together. I love Halo and I like the idea of what you've done. Is this a fan fic? Just curious. Also, you don't have to write your dialogue with who is speaking, you can just say what they've said then who said it just to mix it up a bit.
For example, "Inside of the UNSC Bark in cyrosleep," Thomas answered. Sometimes, you don't even need to say the name because the reader can automatically assume that the next person in the conversation is one out of two. So, if one spoke the other one will speak. I hope you find this helpful and will continue to write your story!
April 16, 2017 | Kalverya Nindo
